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rachelmanija ([personal profile] rachelmanija) wrote2022-06-18 11:56 am

The Annual Migration of Clouds & These Lifeless Things by Premee Mohamed

These are unrelated novellas.

These Lifeless Things has two timelines. In one the Earth is taken over by Lovecraftian horrors and almost all humans are killed; this one is very effective and moving but stops rather than ends. This makes sense because it's a found document, but is still frustrating.

In the other timeline, it's a hundred years later, humanity has inexplicably recovered and has civilization again, the horrors are gone (OR ARE THEY), people don't seem to understand exactly what happened either during the invasion or afterward, and for no clear reason mostly don't believe the documents of it they do have. Grad students are researching the eldritch horror time; one has the found document, but the other grad students don't believe or care about it.

I didn't understand what was going on with the future plot or what its relevance was; maybe a commentary on how the past is hard to fathom and people deny reality? But the denial of reality is typically for political reasons, and there's no political reason I could figure out why people would overwhelmingly pretend an event that killed most of the population was something other than what it was, especially since there's no competing narrative of what did happen.



The Annual Migration of Clouds is much more successful. Reid is a young woman born after an apocalypse combining climate change and a hereditary, possibly sentient fungal disease. Her community lives in what used to be a university, eking out a hardscrabble and sometimes brutal existence that still allows for relationships, art, and trade. It's one of the most convincing depictions of a post-apocalyptic community I've seen - the opposite of the one-note dystopia.

Reid and her mother both have the fungus. Its effects are extremely variable, but two things are consistent: it controls your behavior to protect you/itself (by preventing you from doing dangerous things), and it often (maybe always?) eventually kills its host. I was very curious about this contradiction, which doesn't get addressed much but is probably an accidental side effect given that the fungus seems to want its hosts to survive. Mostly the fungus is important because of Reid's concerns over whether and how it's affecting her and her mother's free will.

The story begins when Reid receives a letter inviting her to join a fabled scientific domed community. The letter itself is of a technological level unachievable to her own people, but no one's ever come back from that dome or even seen it; does it really exist, or is it some kind of weird trick? If it is what it says it is, does she want to leave her own people to join a group that's hoarding knowledge rather than sharing it?

I will say upfront, so you're not disappointed or annoyed by where this novella stops, that the questions about the dome don't get answered, the entire action of the story is Reid making various preparations to leave while she tries to decide whether she's actually going to go, and the story ends when she makes her decision. The story itself is great and the ending is satisfying on an emotional level, but I really wanted more. I hope Mohamed expands this novella, because the world is fantastic.

Have any of you read anything by her? What did you think?

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[personal profile] coffeeandink 2022-06-19 12:31 am (UTC)(link)

I read all of Mohamed's 2021 novellas and her first two novels in December-January, so clearly her voice works for me! "These Lifeless Things" was actually my favorite, although the general public seems to agree with you -- "The Annual Migration of Clouds" and "And What Can We Offer You Tonight?" both got more awards attention.

I don't know if I can explain why the future section worked for me, both because my memory is a bit blurry and because I just ... didn't question it? The future section's general avoidance of/distrust of the accounts of the past honestly seemed like a perfectly realistic trauma reaction to me, especially since it's clear most of the survivors never had any clear idea of what was attacking them and didn't get very clear accounts from the survivors who most closely escaped. It didn't seem to me that anyone disbelieved a catastrophe had happened, only that it was basically a magical Lovecraftian invasion, rather than say something caused by secret experiments or climate change. Climate change does seem pertinent to me, possibly because it looms so big in Mohamed's other work; deniers' refusal to acknowledge or understand a complicated reality, especially when it is outside their personal control, seems relevant even if there aren't massively powerful institutions deliberately spreading misinformation. The whole hard science vs. soft science split (and the bias against "soft" sciences) seemed very plausible, the remnants of intellectual hierarchies still affecting people long after the initial conditions producing the hierarchies are gone.

Anyway, Mohamed announced on Twitter that she sold two sequels to "The Annual Migration of Clouds", so you will get more of that world! I got the impression that one will focus on Henryk and one on Reid, but that may be wrong.

[personal profile] thomasyan 2022-06-19 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
I have not read the novella, but your suggestion

perfectly realistic trauma reaction

sounds like a great angle that would work for me, if the text supports it: The invasion was so alien and horrifying and incomprehensible, that afterward pretty much no one remembers anything about it, so a century on, anything that sounds implausible is dismissed.

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[personal profile] coffeeandink 2022-06-19 12:50 am (UTC)(link)

My understanding of the situation--which may be wrong; Rachel has read this more recently than I have--is that the invasion focused on the major population centers, and most people just didn't escape. The survivors were mostly people in remote areas that the invaders didn't bother with. People who faced the invaders directly and escaped were usually ones who ran fast or had minimal direct contact with invaders, at first because of luck and later because it was simply too dangerous.

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[personal profile] asakiyume 2022-06-19 10:55 am (UTC)(link)
What you say is what I was imagining!